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27-Aug-08
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underdog |
Amys new lover and her pussy face hubby slut |
Great payback, wouldn't want to upset Amy .........summertime75
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25-Aug-08
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Sir Thomas |
Greed |
Best I've read in a long time. Innovative binding, more than just boot licking and other cliched plot details. .........74.131.16.240
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20-Aug-08
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underdog |
Barrowed Balls... |
That was awesome !!!! .........199.4.216.68
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20-Aug-08
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underdog |
Barrowed Balls... |
Can't wait for more!!! .........71.185.204.116
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20-Aug-08
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Aurelius |
Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues (Book 3) |
Read I and II yesterday. Just finished what you have of III this morning. *sigh* I just LOVE poetic justice. I was so wishing that Cavallo would replace Jessi on the operating table. I like when my wishes are granted. The naïveté of the girls as they await their fate in the dungeon adds the the suspense. I must say, I hope the next installment is soon. Very soon!! .........slkslkcmt
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19-Aug-08
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underdog |
Modified Human Furniture |
I LOVE LOVE LOVE the twist at the end. It was beautifully orchestrated! .........68.52.100.13
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19-Aug-08
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underdog |
My Daddy Trains Sex Slaves!! |
You imagination is powerful and very well used. I wanted to keep reading. I would like to see this story delve a little deeper into a clear plot that shows us where this is going. If this is meant to stay a serial, you have truly set yourself up well. I love the locked doors with plenty of new opportunities. Keep it up. I enjoyred your story. .........68.52.100.13
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14-Aug-08
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underdog |
Modified Human Furniture |
Are there more adventures planned with Bingo and the girls? .........71.185.204.116
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13-Aug-08
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Sir Thomas |
Greed |
not bad at all.....would have loved to read more about soem pussy torture but it was nice .........erotickat
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11-Aug-08
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underdog |
OK!...You wanna be a sex slave?! |
o .........194.2.20.68
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10-Aug-08
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Sir Thomas |
Phases of Submission |
This is one of the best stories that I have read. I really enjoyed it thank you. .........67.79.42.254
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06-Aug-08
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Lord Douche |
The Torturer |
Good discriptions and setting the mood. Well paced story. .........75.31.167.88
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06-Aug-08
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Master13 |
A Reluctant Master |
Very well written and highly erotic, I'd give it an excellent mark if it was a complete short story. .........75.31.167.88
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06-Aug-08
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Anne Gray |
Cracking Crystal |
Imaginative and well told tale. Could use some dialog with Crystal as it progressed to show her mental state. Could use some sex other than abusing Crystal's body. .........75.31.167.88
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05-Aug-08
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Aurelius |
Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues (Book 3) |
Update please!!!!!! .........70.254.228.58
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05-Aug-08
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Aurelius |
Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues (Book 3) |
Hey, update again! :D .........88.109.240.182
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04-Aug-08
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Aurelius |
Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues (Book 3) |
Just testing .........webmaster
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03-Aug-08
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mogollondog |
Mountain Slave |
What better way to be abused than by a gang of hot, young, horny, oversexed teenagers! GREAT STORY! .........underdog
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03-Aug-08
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Aurelius |
An American Girl in Aden |
update your ponygirls story please? :) .........88.110.113.240
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03-Aug-08
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Sir Thomas |
Phases of Submission |
Very good written story, Bodymods are very welcome!
Hope to read more of this kind of stories also in future. .........kira300467
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31-Jul-08
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Alice Parker |
The Bad Samaritan |
Rather dark but a god read .........summertime75
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31-Jul-08
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Abe Froman |
Megan's New Clothes |
Great story, where can I find this shop LOL .........summertime75
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28-Jul-08
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Nikita |
Carpool Set Her Free by Nikita © 2006 |
Much too short but exciting. .........summertime75
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28-Jul-08
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Nikita |
All Tied Up in Knots by Nikita © 2006 |
More from Minx please, great story. Thank you .........summertime75
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28-Jul-08
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Nikita |
Ponytail |
Great story, but it left me wanting MORE .........summertime75
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28-Jul-08
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Sir Thomas |
Greed |
Yes Greed is Good,will there be any further adventures from Casey? I certainly hope so, it would be good to know how she managed to cope being auctioned off. .........summertime75
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28-Jul-08
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Sir Thomas |
Phases of Submission |
Wonderful story, great combination of puppy and ponygirls, what more could any reader want. .........summertime75
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26-Jul-08
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mogollondog |
Mountain Slave |
Good story, good ideas. Such hard bondage could perhaps be used for a much longer story. I didn't feel as though i understood the anticipation in the subs mind as much as I would have liked to . . .........60.50.53.42
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Hello. Thanks for your comment. I agree with you about the length and that the story could be expanded. Unfortunately I just don't have the time right now. I'm working two jobs at the moment and time for writing is very limited. I hope to be able to expand on the story at a later time. I posted it now at the request of some of my friends who wanted to read it. Also, if you are a writer please feel free to use the idea and expand it yourself if you'd like.
Mogollondog
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12-Jul-08
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Aurelius |
Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues (Book 3) |
nag nag ... next chapter ... nag ... nag .........62.178.182.94
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07-Jul-08
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Sir Thomas |
RAAC (The Remedial Attitude Adjustment Center) |
Wow what a great read, pony girls and puppy girls with a touch of sci-fi what more could one ask for. This has to be one of the best stories I have read so far. Many thanks .........summertime75
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07-Jul-08
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Sir Thomas |
Ponyland |
An enjoyable read but lacked depth .........summertime75
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07-Jul-08
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Sir Thomas |
Ponyland |
An enjoyable read but lacked depth .........summertime75
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07-Jul-08
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Sir Thomas |
Ponyland |
An enjoyable read but lacked depth .........summertime75
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06-Jul-08
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mogollondog |
Mountain Slave |
wow, that was harsh, but very hot .........70.171.186.181
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05-Jul-08
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Anne Gray |
Cracking Crystal |
wow, that was good, cept would have liked a bit more to the end, would have liked to have heard Crystal submit herself to her as a permanent slave. .........70.171.186.181
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05-Jul-08
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mogollondog |
Gang's Girls |
all I can say is wow, that was hot .........70.171.186.181
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Thanks for your comment. Glad you enjoyed the first chapter. I'll be posting the second and final chapter (for now) sometime next week. I think you'll like it too. Maybe better.
Mogollondog
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29-Jun-08
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Anne Gray |
Cracking Crystal |
Great story but I would liked to have read how Ms Richards adjusted after her release - perhaps next time?
Chris .........summertime75
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28-Jun-08
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jameslakes |
The Rod |
My first story to read on here...and what a read!! You write very well, and i hope to read more! Thank you for sharing :) .........74.218.60.210
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26-Jun-08
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Webmaster |
Notes from Ed |
Testing new anti-spam comments .........webmaster
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26-Jun-08
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Sir Thomas |
RAAC (The Remedial Attitude Adjustment Center) |
Spam, removed by Ed .........200.75.96.114
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22-Jun-08
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Becky Gellan |
My Life As His Bitch |
There are continuity issues with chapters 8 and 9 and chapter 10 leaves us wanting MORE. Thoroughly enjoyed reading Rebecca’s exploits and hopefully you will write more, especially how she “enjoys” the new suit LOL
Chris .........summertime75
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21-Jun-08
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Aurelius |
Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues (Book 3) |
Its not looking good :o
I trust the next chapter will be good as always :) captivating story! .........208.101.35.52
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19-Jun-08
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Aurelius |
Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues (Book 3) |
Cavallo got what she deserved ... but i sure hope that Master Alex returns soon ... His slaves need Him quickly!! .........70.254.228.58
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17-Jun-08
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Carmenica_Diaz |
A Suitable Punishment |
an excellent story with an equally excellent plot its a pity more wives don't think like you there would be less divorce and more faithfullness among men especially an excellent read all round well done .........78.151.173.25
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13-Jun-08
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Will Ferenc |
The Divine Miss |
shave him .........211.30.24.115
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12-Jun-08
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wontworry |
Whatever you want |
very nice how about a part 2 .........74.14.156.202
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09-Jun-08
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Aurelius |
Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues (Book 3) |
OMG ... It's getting so exciting ... this is truly excellent!!! .........70.137.14.97
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05-Jun-08
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Velvetglove |
Hard Labor |
Congrats. It's literate and well-proofed, and I admire the ambition, even though the future is rather too near. However, I feel the pacing is too fast, the erotic elements barely sketched. What's the hurry? .........alan34
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31-May-08
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Aurelius |
Even Ponygirls Sometimes Get The Blues (Book 1) |
Amazing .........82.40.210.179
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30-May-08
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Carmenica_Diaz |
Penalties |
Lovely. Outstanding. Such a tease, and an affectionate one at that. Thank you! .........71.139.3.235
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