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Author |
Story |
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04-Feb-12
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DarkMoonFire |
Say No |
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Comment on complete story
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| 46.208.218.5
said:
good flowing narrative, but the tenses need organising.
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04-Feb-12
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LJL6 |
Ella: Reborn (temporary title) |
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Comment on story up to Chapter Two-No longer Ella
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| 46.208.218.5
said:
great start. looking forward to the next update.
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01-Feb-12
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DarkMoonFire |
Say No |
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Comment on complete story
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| FerranArtist
said:
I hope you don't take offense, but it's hard to concentrate on the story when the tenses change three times before the end of the first paragraph. Was this proofread at all?
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This really was a first draft that was requested by my friend. I wouldn't have published it yet if they had been a bit more patient. I actually just did some updating so if you see any more errors in the past versus present tense please let me know so I can fix them. :)
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31-Jan-12
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petril |
CHAINED DESIRES |
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Comment on story up to Chained Desires Chapter 6
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| 98.68.208.82
said:
Like the art too!
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31-Jan-12
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DomJohn |
GEORGE AND ROSIE |
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Comment on complete story
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| 206.53.148.208
said:
I gave this an excellent. Though I'd really like to see another chapter or so, you didn't end the story. I agree with Lauren. It was a cliffhanger. Please continue it.
XOXO,
Tiffany
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30-Jan-12
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1062 |
The Path: Part I - The Beginning |
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Comment on story up to 3. Conditioning
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| 24.193.44.220
said:
First
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27-Jan-12
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Lord Douche |
Dance Lessons |
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Comment on complete story
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| DarkMoonFire
said:
I love how this story started out as a simple first time experience, then took a much darker turn.
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26-Jan-12
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LJL6 |
Ella: Reborn (temporary title) |
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Comment on: Chapter one-Awake
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| 86.142.6.65
said:
More Please
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23-Jan-12
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Callidus |
Secretary |
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Comment on: Feelings
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| 173.197.73.107
said:
Suspenseful.
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23-Jan-12
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Callidus |
Secretary |
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Comment on: Smack
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| 173.197.73.107
said:
I admre the way the drama is building.
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22-Jan-12
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Callidus |
Secretary |
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Comment on: Bumpy Road
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| 173.197.73.107
said:
It is getting hotter.
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21-Jan-12
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underdog |
Kittys Little Man...A miniature sex slave story... |
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Comment on story up to From the frying pan into the fire!!
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| 65.8.102.38
said:
Good
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19-Jan-12
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LJL6 |
Ella: Reborn (temporary title) |
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Comment on story up to Chapter one-Awake
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| 141.0.9.16
said:
Looking foreward to pt 2. Keep up the good work...
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19-Jan-12
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LJL6 |
Ella: Reborn (temporary title) |
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Comment on story up to Chapter one-Awake
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| 68.108.185.87
said:
I hope to reasd more...plaese continue...
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I have been working like crazy lately so I haven't had much time to write, but more is coming soon!
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18-Jan-12
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Miss Irene Clearmont |
Denise |
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Comment on complete story
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| 184.158.5.152
said:
This is very exciting for me. I love Fm and have for years, somehow I tried Ff along the way and find it even more fulfilling. But they both really move me in a very fundamental way. I love your writing and in fact found my way to this site in search of it. Great stuff, thanks!
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Dear 184.158.5.152 (!)
Thank you for your comment. If you wish you can E mail me at missireneclearmont@yahoo.com and I'll send you the PDF version and maybe some other stuff... I have tidied most of these stories up and can E mail the PDF versions directly.
Irene.
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18-Jan-12
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TiedGuy |
Freshman Slave |
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Comment on: Slave Labor (Except for start is F/m)
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| dobermann
said:
love it when he has to wathch them by pool drinking ice drinks while he has to just keep slaveing away in heat and can smell and see them eating breakfast and him nothing but has to do the 4 minute test just for water . great storie.
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17-Jan-12
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Callidus |
Blackmail |
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Comment on story up to Moments
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| 173.197.73.107
said:
I found the story engrosing and horrifying and wanted Darla to get her come-uppance, or more important for Lisa to be saved from the monstrous Darla and from her own stupidity for going along with it for so long.
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16-Jan-12
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Callidus |
Secretary |
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Comment on story up to Feelings
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| 71.96.228.29
said:
a little surprised there would be typos ... her flightiness is understandable due to her naivete, but there could be a little less of it ... he could be a bit more demonstrably authorative while still appearing human (even caring, at least to the extent of bringing her along)
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15-Jan-12
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underdog |
KATS home made boy toy |
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Comment on story up to Good Morning Slave...Ready for day TWO?
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| terry7575
said:
Very good, I like it.
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15-Jan-12
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paltego |
The Loving Wife |
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Comment on story up to Chapter 4 - Compelled to Watch
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| 12.50.76.66
said:
Excellent, I love it
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14-Jan-12
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TiedGuy |
18/male/slave seeks mature mistress in New York |
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Comment on story up to Chasity Through Pain
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| 173.197.73.107
said:
The entire story was outstanding and exptremely provocative and satisfying female domination. Very well written and leaves one wishing for much more.
Thanks for this much at least.
BB
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14-Jan-12
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TiedGuy |
18/male/slave seeks mature mistress in New York |
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Comment on: Chasity Through Pain
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| 173.197.73.107
said:
The entire story was outstanding and highly provoicative female domination.
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11-Jan-12
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James P |
Young Blonde Executive |
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Comment on story up to The Final Chapter
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| 24.129.38.196
said:
just a little too long but effective and a good read.
Keep up the good work,
Gregor
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04-Jan-12
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Ed at smtales.com |
Kindle and ebooks |
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Comment on: Kindle
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| digby47
said:
Yes! I read "this kind of thing on it´ all the time and have purchased many ebooks in Kindle format. I would be interested in many of the stories here in Kindle format.
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If you use the Kindle's browser you can visit the site. I haven't done much to the main site pages, but once you get to the story text you'll find it's perfect for the Kindle. I could certain make more of the site's pages Kindle-friendly if people are interested, although if you're adept with the Kindle's navigation you'll get on fine as it is. Also, there's no reason why I couldn't add a send-to-kindle option like you get with Amazon. It's a pretty simple job. But I don't want to sort-of sell our authors' work in this way without their consent.
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04-Jan-12
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Jennifer Crowe |
I'd Do Anything For Lulz |
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Comment on: 6: A Beautiful Mindf**k
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| 173.197.73.107
said:
not hot
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04-Jan-12
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underdog |
Beckys Transition |
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Comment on: Be carefull what you ask for...
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| 121.219.72.66
said:
I had the feeling I was there too!
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03-Jan-12
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Callidus |
Secretary |
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Comment on story up to Feelings
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| 178.0.208.207
said:
a lot of psychological insight
slow buildung of the story but eccellent style
I´d prefer a little bit more humilation in public but I´m willing to await the development of their relationship
in short: one of the best pieces of a modern s/m-story I´ve read in years
Congrats from a fan with real-life experience (would like to meet "John" sometimes ...)
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03-Jan-12
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Callidus |
Secretary |
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Comment on: Feelings
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| 178.0.208.207
said:
please go on and finish this story !!!
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03-Jan-12
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Callidus |
Secretary |
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Comment on: Smack
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| 178.0.208.207
said:
world class !!!
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03-Jan-12
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Callidus |
Secretary |
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Comment on: Finding My Man
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| 178.0.208.207
said:
wow!
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02-Jan-12
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
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Comment on: Chapter One
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| 68.88.194.234
said:
Beutiful description
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31-Dec-11
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will ferenc |
She shall have Music |
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Comment on: excerpts from 'She shall have Music'
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| 78.147.78.245
said:
exellent
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30-Dec-11
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polecat |
Her Breasts |
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Comment on: Chapter One: Tabu
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| 203.100.208.7
said:
yes, that was awessome!
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30-Dec-11
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kevinbarnes |
My StepDaughter |
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Comment on story up to Chapter 2
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| 203.100.208.7
said:
you could have whipped her tits!
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30-Dec-11
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MastrKink |
The Bar |
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Comment on: Return to the Bar
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| 203.100.208.7
said:
they could have slapped her tits
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30-Dec-11
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underdog |
Football Slave... |
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Comment on story up to My worst "Monday Night Football Game"
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| 203.100.208.7
said:
i would love to have read about girls playing with each others tits
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29-Dec-11
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1062 |
The Path: Part I - The Beginning |
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Comment on: 2. Evaluation
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| 68.108.185.87
said:
It just keeps getting better, I especially love the PERMANANT piercings...can´t wait to read more..excellent work!
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26-Dec-11
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petril |
CHAINED DESIRES |
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Comment on: Chained Desires Chapter 3
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| 78.143.205.79
said:
It´s hard to believ it, but this story just keeps on getting better with each new chapter! Extremely well done, petril, and I hope there will be many more chapters to follow. How I would love/hate to be in the tender care of this group of young ladies for an afternoon!
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24-Dec-11
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petril |
CHAINED DESIRES |
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Comment on: Chained Desires Chapter 2
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| 78.143.205.79
said:
This is turing out to be even better than I thought it would! Excellent- again, and thank you for this red-hot tale!
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22-Dec-11
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petril |
CHAINED DESIRES |
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Comment on: Chained Desires Chapter 1
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| TiedGuy
said:
Great story - I wish I were Frank
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21-Dec-11
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TiedGuy |
18/male/slave seeks mature mistress in New York |
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Comment on story up to Threeway
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| 50.113.61.229
said:
Excellent!
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21-Dec-11
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grinder |
Helen's New Role |
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Comment on story up to Chapter 2
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| 68.35.115.91
said:
very good story thank you
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21-Dec-11
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1062 |
The Path: Part I - The Beginning |
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Comment on story up to 1. Processing
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| 68.108.180.9
said:
you ARE WHAT THIS SITE IS ALL ABOUT..I HOPE THIS IS A LONG ADVENTURE, LOOKING FORWARD TO MUCH MORE.
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21-Dec-11
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1062 |
The Path: Part I - The Beginning |
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Comment on: 1. Processing
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| 68.108.180.9
said:
ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE! MORE PLEASE!
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19-Dec-11
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underdog |
FANTASY VS. REALITY, MY FAREWELL TO THE SITE. |
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Comment on story up to HAPPY TRAILS TO YOU ALL
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| 189.69.23.218
said:
I have my pets, and I understand you. I hope you can find what you are looking for!
And our wishes to Beanie full recovery!!!!
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17-Dec-11
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paltego |
The Loving Wife |
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Comment on: Chapter 1 - Lucky Man
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| 75.8.78.113
said:
a bit over the top hygiene-wise, but otherwise great.
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13-Dec-11
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mogollondog |
Mountain Slave |
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Comment on complete story
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| 82.132.138.245
said:
I absolutely love this story, its unbelievably hot!
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12-Dec-11
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Master Jay |
The Blackmailed Wife |
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Comment on: Moving the relationship along
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| 71.173.15.41
said:
Better
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11-Dec-11
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TiedGuy |
Freshman Slave |
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Comment on: Autofellatio
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| 60.52.102.61
said:
wow..
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09-Dec-11
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Master Jay |
The Blackmailed Wife |
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Comment on: A Change in Relationship
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| 71.173.15.41
said:
The material is good, but needs tweeking grammer wise and readability.
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