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02-Sep-10
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experimenter73 |
Blackmail |
76.99.131.6 said:
fantasti story
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01-Sep-10
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underdog |
Patty always wanted a DOG!! |
92.50.56.171 said:
wow
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01-Sep-10
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James P |
The Revenge Squad |
71.1.111.7 said:
I hate stories that regress. Besides that, where's the rest of the story? This was written years ago.
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01-Sep-10
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James P |
A Proper Bulbing |
71.1.111.7 said:
Great story - I like having my balls busted, but I'm not sure I could handle that.
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31-Aug-10
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Callidus |
Blackmail |
4.153.189.126 said:
i keep losing and regaining interest because it was so long, but all and all it was good. By the way i believe i read this somewhere before, but the story wasn't this long. I hope you continue this story
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29-Aug-10
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drkfetyshnyghts |
DEVASTATION Pt 1 - A Perfect Life No More |
71.53.134.35 said:
more wow
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29-Aug-10
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drkfetyshnyghts |
DISTURBIA |
71.53.134.35 said:
wow
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29-Aug-10
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polecat |
Passing the Baton |
205.188.117.80 said:
polecat
Manages to build from one incdent to another with incrreasing intensity.
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29-Aug-10
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Callidus |
Slut Corps |
4.153.187.20 said:
it was really good, i hope there's a continuation
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26-Aug-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
68.162.158.59 said:
a little long,but okay. the use of electricty was good but her getting the upper hand just sucked.
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20-Aug-10
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underdog |
My Own Worst Enemy....My Story of Submission |
121.106.102.54 said:
PLEASE, continue with this story.
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20-Aug-10
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underdog |
My Own Worst Enemy....My Story of Submission |
121.106.102.54 said:
PLEASE, continue with this story.
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17-Aug-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
117.207.219.6 said:
Mind blowing!!!!!!!!!!
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14-Aug-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
vegas2uf said:
toooo good............
Waiting for more.....
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14-Aug-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
117.204.172.123 said:
Please Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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13-Aug-10
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underdog |
Karen portable Sex Toy... |
tat2dkrystal said:
LOVE THE EXTREME MODS, ESPECIALLY THE CUT VOCAL CHORDS
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11-Aug-10
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underdog |
Beckys Transition |
tat2dkrystal said:
Great read, I LOVED the modification to her three holes
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09-Aug-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
Selena said:
oh my god this was fuckin' amazing oh god i am soo horny... Jesus, please write more please, please..
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09-Aug-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
78.131.86.134 said:
oh god the story is sooo great pls write more...
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05-Aug-10
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grinder |
The Red House |
86.165.129.118 said:
Nicely written, although could be a little more detailed and lingering, but more of this please.
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31-Jul-10
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Callidus |
Slut Corps |
109.60.4.132 said:
great...love it
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30-Jul-10
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The Webmaster |
Notes from Ed |
webmaster said:
asdfasdf
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30-Jul-10
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The Webmaster |
Notes from Ed |
webmaster said:
test
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27-Jul-10
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underdog |
The "Perfect" Marrige......? |
digby47 said:
This 2nd chapter is GREAT also!!! Thank You for the gift of your story.
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27-Jul-10
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underdog |
The "Perfect" Marrige......? |
78.143.224.21 said:
Underdog, yet again you have excelled yourself. Absolutely first class. Thank you for sharing.
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27-Jul-10
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underdog |
The "Perfect" Marrige......? |
digby47 said:
PLEASE, continue with this story. I can't wait!!
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27-Jul-10
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underdog |
The "Perfect" Marrige......? |
digby47 said:
PLEASE, continue with this story. I can's wait!!
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25-Jul-10
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Mad Lews |
Wednesday in Soho |
210.4.226.230 said:
Excellent sexy tale!
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23-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
82.34.48.91 said:
Please continue
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Continuation posted!
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22-Jul-10
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Callidus |
Slut Corps |
90.182.61.54 said:
Great one! I am completely taken away. The logic that led the main character into her current situation is still believable and yet I can see how frightened she must be now and all of that knowing she is the only one to be blamed. I am sure she will fully regret it in next chapters. Or will she not?... :-)
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21-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
92.29.175.114 said:
waiting for more.....
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And your waiting is rewarded... ;)
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18-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
razzle said:
Great story, and I like the pace you set. Can't wait for more.
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More is now posted! Glad you're enjoying it!
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17-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
206.74.139.82 said:
I think the story is very good but hope it contains more torture as it continues.
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There is more torture included in this most recent chapter. I hope you enjoy!
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17-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Slave To The Machine |
87.211.101.91 said:
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12-Jul-10
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Callidus |
Blackmail |
jkim09 said:
So far, this is an awesome story and gyrl juices much! Like all these stories, it is hoped there will be a satisfactory ending of some sort...99% just stop.
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11-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
underdog said:
Excellent readng of course...love the forced orgasms!!
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Thanks for reading! More of those to come...
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10-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Blackmail |
65.163.127.200 said:
wow...
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Thanks :)
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08-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
masterslittleslave said:
i love this and cant wait to see what happens next
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The next installment is posted. Thanks for the compliment, and for reading!
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06-Jul-10
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Alice Parker |
The Bad Samaritan |
lesbiman said:
had to suspend disbelief a little too much
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06-Jul-10
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Anne Gray |
Cracking Crystal |
underdog said:
I've read Anne Gray stories on other sites, and it's NEVER a disappointment...the imagination, the creativity, the realism, and the details are always excellent...always a pleasure to read...and await more!!
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05-Jul-10
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underdog |
KATS home made boy toy |
fetishfiend said:
This story gave me a hard-on that i could only get rid of by cumming myself
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04-Jul-10
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polecat |
Passing the Baton 2; Lila's Tale |
121.50.198.150 said:
Perfect pace, love the vivid images your writing creates, perhaps somewhat too grotesque in places - I must admit that I prefer the dolcett approach to a snuff fantasy.
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04-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Blackmail |
jkim09 said:
gyrl totally loved the start, the realistic blackmail, the ear bud orders, the "noose tightening", and gyrl was very close to cumming, but the child/train did not do anything for her. excellent writer, that is fosur.
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Thanks for reading, and for the compliment. I'm sorry that the story got a little off track for you, but I think that the next chapter will be more to your liking.
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03-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
jkim09 said:
gyrl thinks this moves at a delicious pace, with every scene completely under control.
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Thank you! I am glad that you enjoy the pace of my writing. There will be a lot more to come.
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02-Jul-10
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underdog |
And Justice for All... |
chippie50 said:
Underdog should have at least the politeness to run his writings through a spell checker. But still then not all errors would be found.
This is orthographically an abominable piece of text.
Not one paragraph was free from spelling errors so atrocious I refrained from reading any further after Chapter 1.
Such spelling is simply unacceptable for a published text -- and yes, Underdog, submitting something to an internet site IS PUBLISHING !
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02-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Blackmail |
68.123.248.22 said:
wonderful
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Thank you :)
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02-Jul-10
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FerranArtist |
Because God Told Him To |
smnewby said:
please tell me you are going to continue this story.
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02-Jul-10
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Mad Lews |
Wednesday in Soho |
68.123.248.22 said:
very engaging
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01-Jul-10
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experimenter73 |
Erica's Capture |
68.123.248.22 said:
compelling
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Thanks a lot. I like that word. It says a lot.
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30-Jun-10
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bound83 |
True Dreams |
68.123.248.22 said:
engaging
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